Wednesday, February 25, 2009

A Good Listener



Aloha Writers,
Photos that are taken at a sharp angle gives the image of lines converging. this is key stoning. This effect can give expression and impact to the landscape. let's write inspired by key stoning today. Enjoy!


Virgin Jungle's Uncle

Never goony clever forests go on forever
Pristine patch of Earth's only need is wide girth
Ribbons of rivers flow as rare creature givers
Stretch of green before long may go unseen

To be untouched away from so much
Capturing beauty remains our best duty
If even one waterfall answers the call
Yet they dam it anyway and build the railway

Don't mind a little road to the mine
Come one and all let's watch waterfalls fall
A mine needs a railway anyway to take it away
See the untrammeled stay left untrampled

Battle for the pristine little clear spring
Burning so bright we still need the life
Virgin jungle's uncle try not to bungle
Our natural heritage out here on the ledge

Such a sweet smile she clowns around a while
To make us laugh that's why I cry
A human deserves pristine preserves
And natural heritage back from the edge

2 comments:

  1. I'm not a writer but, I think I know the "uncle" whom you are referring to. I'm probably wrong. People are still bitter about the building of the rail. I hope you are talkin' about the one in Honolulu..if not then delete that :)

    (hm..what about that writing about "laying some rail"?)

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  2. yes you are onto it.. extrapolate out to global too :)

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